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All Deviations


You were the reason I tripped.
I should tell you that
but I won't.
Tomorrow
my camera
will blur the old church
behind your face
your black hair
will contrast sharply
against the white-washed stucco.

If I ask it
you will raise an eyebrow
the way you do
when you think you might
disagree
then I will snap the shot
and you
will remain there
by the church
forever
on the old sun baked road.

You were the reason I tripped.
And goodnight
can mean many things
but your kiss landed
on my lips
the edge of wet
and let go
and I went up the stairs
and tripped.
I should tell you.
But I won't.
©2006-2008 ~myfallfromgrace
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~Pixil8ed:iconPixil8ed: Dec 18, 2006, 9:24:33 AM
This is my very favorite.

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"There was no end to the American sadness and the American madness. Someday we'll all start laughing and roll on the ground when we realize how funny it's been." -Jack Kerouac
~Kerttu:iconKerttu: Dec 18, 2006, 11:33:17 PM
I love the images that come to my mind.
Especially about the church and the camera and stuff.

It's like a romantic movie reel.

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If you spell Chuck Norris in Scrabble, you win. Forever.
~julesse:iconjulesse: Jun 25, 2007, 10:56:19 AM
wunderschön ...

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~myfallfromgrace:iconmyfallfromgrace: Jun 25, 2007, 5:27:49 PM
vielen dank :) ich hab es am liebsten von die andere. (does that make sense?)

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~julesse:iconjulesse: Jun 26, 2007, 3:13:52 AM
yeah it does^^ :-*

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