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if we rise
in time
not all at once
as the day
that breaks
empty and willing
when i have kept
the desert empty
of all but thoughts
of you

now and then
and here and there
uninhabitable and
barren but for
my measured step
light and alone
along the sand
if we are strong
i swear we can
look beyond

are you lonely
and do you want?
all you need
is to forgive me

i am the dream
in the willow
at your window
i promise you
by every drop
of love i had
for you
i will blow away
and leave you peace.
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*jjackm:iconjjackm: Mar 11, 2008, 9:23:05 AM
I think I can relate...
~myfallfromgrace:iconmyfallfromgrace: Mar 11, 2008, 9:29:19 AM
hmm. i was just about to delete it. maybe i won't.

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i never learn
*jjackm:iconjjackm: Mar 11, 2008, 9:32:42 AM
nah, I think it is good.
~Pixil8ed:iconPixil8ed: Mar 11, 2008, 12:18:51 PM
Don't delete it. It's nice. I like your recurring desert themes. I have my own affinities for the desert.

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"There was no end to the American sadness and the American madness. Someday we'll all start laughing and roll on the ground when we realize how funny it's been." -Jack Kerouac
~myfallfromgrace:iconmyfallfromgrace: Mar 11, 2008, 3:08:48 PM
as i have witnessed.... ;)

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i never learn
~myfallfromgrace:iconmyfallfromgrace: Mar 11, 2008, 3:09:34 PM
thanks :)

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i never learn
~Renee85:iconRenee85: Apr 14, 2008, 3:14:26 PM
i loved the last stanza :-)!

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So I'll fall in love with music and make love to art, though they've no arms to hold me they know my heart <3
~myfallfromgrace:iconmyfallfromgrace: Apr 14, 2008, 4:42:11 PM
thanks. i guess it's what i was trying to get to for the whole poem ;)

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i never learn