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the geography of not sleeping by ~myfallfromgrace:iconmyfallfromgrace:



Wherever he stood
the ground gave way beneath him
(she was too busy digging holes
to be the hand
I hoped to hold)


The resulting updraft would sweep
a primordial arc to his apex
(it was the same old smoke she blew
with wool pulled tight
new sheep, same fold)


He's easiest to spot
just after dusk blotting out
the pale neon
of the third street bar.
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a collaborative work for two voices with [link] the mighty shane ;)
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~Mr-Bradshaw:iconMr-Bradshaw: Apr 11, 2008, 1:55:59 PM
I really enjoyed that, keep it up! =D
*YouInventedMe:iconYouInventedMe: Apr 11, 2008, 1:57:53 PM
absolutely wonderful
writing with you

I think this came out splendidly

xo!

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